Hey, I loved yours - it's fantastic! Made me laugh so hard and it's totally different.
I don't think MarySueBasher will get upset (she's a bit of a multiple personality - it's hard for her to get all her ducks - or sheep - in a row). As long as you don't have a Mexican whore, global destruction and the wrath of God I think you'll be fine ;). Post it! You could always put a note on if you're worried saying what you say above.
BTW we were talking about your "reunion sequence" at the bash on Sunday after brunch and recommending it to anyone who hadn't seen it. Rave reviews!
Thanks Alice! I really appreciate you writing back. Glad you liked it. I'll probably post it. Maybe I'll add the picture of the fire. (Kind of just looks like fog 'cause there's an inversion holding the smoke down... (Ain't no fog in this state though, not enough moisture.)
No Mexican whores or global destruction coming up. But God does figure prominently in either the next chapter or the one after. (Depends on how long the first part of the next chapter gets.) Between that chapter and the pictures I think people will pretty much figure out where I live by then. So I won't have to worry too much about the sheep festival blowing my cover. ;)
I'm very flattered that people were talking about the "reunion sequence" at the bash and think it's funny.
Glad you like the picture of us stranded! I meant to delete it this morning, so I'm glad I left it up. That's the reason I always pack for a week even if we're just going for the afternoon...